For this task we had show the difference between showing writing vs telling writing. There was a lot of detail in this task and this task was very interesting.
I like how you have added color into your work. I appreciate the hard work you have put in. You have used amazing words to show each sentence and you have great work.
*Questions* Would you like to do more writing? What made you think to come up with those sentences?
Hi vake I like your show not tell writing I also like the background it looks awesome I also like how to described it.
ReplyDeleteHi Vake,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have added color into your work. I appreciate the hard work you have put in. You have used amazing words to show each sentence and you have great work.
*Questions*
Would you like to do more writing?
What made you think to come up with those sentences?
But have a great day and goodbye.
Hi Vake
ReplyDeleteI think you have made very good sentences and you have used very good words.
(Questions)
Would you write more if you could?
How long did it take you?
How did you think of such good sentences?
Bye Take